RE: bat in the saddle againnnnn...a/k/batzulger is still spewing out words Part the Sixth
07-14-2020, 08:59 AM
07-14-2020, 08:59 AM
Good installment, but it's got an error at the end that must have been a braino or caused by a momentary distraction, when Rin uses "nee-chan" for "little sister" instead of "imouto-chan". I wouldn't mention it all except that it is the first error of any kind I have ever noticed in something by Batzulger.
-- Bob
I have been Roland, Beowulf, Achilles, Gilgamesh, Clark Kent, Mary Sue, DJ Croft, Skysaber. I have been
called a hundred names and will be called a thousand more before the sun grows dim and cold....
I have been Roland, Beowulf, Achilles, Gilgamesh, Clark Kent, Mary Sue, DJ Croft, Skysaber. I have been
called a hundred names and will be called a thousand more before the sun grows dim and cold....