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Update thread 30: #include: Something Witty Here.

K sai
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10-21-2014, 12:12 PM

And oddly enough for a 'single' book, the worldbuilding feels deeper. And the Extended version was an actual improvement, which was surprising.

...BG, I am wondering though. So far Faith's addition to the story hasn't changed anything - down to identical injuries and dialogue. I would have thought, that at the least, Ally would have been injured less given not having to kill all the bad guys herself.

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