(08-19-2023, 02:29 PM)robkelk Wrote: I'm tempted to revert this edit - adding words to what's in boldface for the first title drop, lampshading the actual title drop, replacing grammatical English with an eggcorn,... and one bit that's a matter of personal style so it might or might not enhance the trope description.
Should I?
I like the change myself. It adds particular emphasis to the point of the description, and I don't believe we have any ironclad rule against causal phrasing (wanna is a fairly normal slang version of want to) so long as the meaning is still clear.