(08-20-2023, 08:24 PM)GethN7 Wrote:(08-20-2023, 07:12 PM)n this, but I would like to sayBob Schroeck Wrote:(08-19-2023, 02:29 PM)robkelk Wrote: I'm tempted to revert this edit - adding words to what's in boldface for the first title drop, lampshading the actual title drop, replacing grammatical English with an eggcorn,... and one bit that's a matter of personal style so it might or might not enhance the trope description.
Should I?
I'd say revert. We don't pothole title drops to Title Drop, that's... no. Just no. Likewise adding words to the boldface -- if it's not in the title, it doesn't get bolded.
The eye dialect "wanna" is counter to our house style in this instance, too. Kill it all.
I won't argue with most of this, nor will I challenge you on this, but I personally am not opposed to the idea of some casual lingo (so long as the meaning is still clear) and a limited use of bollding if it gives emphasis to an idea, but that's just my personal taste, I'll defer to policy if push comes to shove.
Given that Bob's issues are things we discuss in the Style Guide, I'm going along with his vote on this.
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Rob Kelk
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But words can break your heart.
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Rob Kelk
Sticks and stones can break your bones,
But words can break your heart.
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Boycotting all products from the USA as long as that country's leader continues to threaten to annex my native country.
Government of Canada: How to immigrate to Canada
Government of Canada: Claiming refugee protection (asylum) from within Canada