<deep sigh> The perils of writing scenes out of order: sometimes you have to trim a good bit of writing, and can't save it for later because it won't make sense anywhere else.
In this case, I wrote the scene where Our Heroes defeat Fish Eye once and for all before writing the scenes that lead up to it, and only realized when I got to it that Sailor Venus could not be in the scene after all. So... what could have been:
"What do we need to do now so he doesn't die in our custody?"
"Give it a kiss," Venus suggested. "It's so romantic that you Canadians kiss your love in public."
I don't know whether she said that on purpose, but it defused my growing anger with the Amazon Trio.
"That's the wrong kind of koi, Venus," Mercury said.
"And it's only in Newfoundland where people kiss fish, and even there they only kiss cod," I added.
In this case, I wrote the scene where Our Heroes defeat Fish Eye once and for all before writing the scenes that lead up to it, and only realized when I got to it that Sailor Venus could not be in the scene after all. So... what could have been:
"What do we need to do now so he doesn't die in our custody?"
"Give it a kiss," Venus suggested. "It's so romantic that you Canadians kiss your love in public."
I don't know whether she said that on purpose, but it defused my growing anger with the Amazon Trio.
"That's the wrong kind of koi, Venus," Mercury said.
"And it's only in Newfoundland where people kiss fish, and even there they only kiss cod," I added.
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Rob Kelk
Sticks and stones can break your bones,
But words can break your heart.
- unknown
Boycotting all products from the USA as long as that country's leader continues to threaten to annex my native country.
Government of Canada: How to immigrate to Canada
Government of Canada: Claiming refugee protection (asylum) from within Canada
Rob Kelk
Sticks and stones can break your bones,
But words can break your heart.
- unknown
Boycotting all products from the USA as long as that country's leader continues to threaten to annex my native country.
Government of Canada: How to immigrate to Canada
Government of Canada: Claiming refugee protection (asylum) from within Canada