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Re: Chapter 13 Is Now Available!
Ace Dreamer
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Re: another (very minor) nitpick
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10-18-2003, 10:28 PM
> Sylia took her cigarette from her lips and blew out another cloud
> of smoke. Time her for her own contribution.
I assume that should be "Time here for her own..." ?
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Re: Chapter 13 Is Now Available! - by Loki Laufeyjarson - 10-17-2003, 06:58 PM
Re: Chapter 13 Is Now Available! - by Zojojojo - 10-18-2003, 12:53 AM
another nitpick - by Loki Laufeyjarson - 10-18-2003, 06:44 AM
Re: another nitpick - by Bob Schroeck - 10-18-2003, 07:04 PM
Re: another (very minor) nitpick - by Ace Dreamer - 10-18-2003, 10:28 PM
Re: yet another (very minor) nitpick - by Ace Dreamer - 10-21-2003, 10:52 AM
KS - by Logan Darklighter - 10-21-2003, 04:45 PM
Look people. - by jpub - 10-22-2003, 04:35 AM
Re: Tea - by Bob Schroeck - 10-22-2003, 01:50 PM
....SK....SK....SK.... - by cpt kangarooski - 10-23-2003, 01:57 AM
Re: ....SK....SK....SK.... - by Ebony - 10-23-2003, 08:28 AM
Re: ....SK....SK....SK.... - by Bob Schroeck - 10-23-2003, 01:53 PM

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