Well now... first up I must say thats some really NICE work there 
*Some spoiler spacing*
Its nice to see Megumi's celestial situation resolved, though I think I half expected it. As nice as the idea of her gaining soldier powers was, halfway reading that section of the chapter, I suddenly didn't think it would have fit so to speak.
Doug's job was nicely worked in, I didn't quite expect him to find a job at all this story arc given the amount of time left till the bike is restored.
The resolution of Paradox's bookends though was totally out of the left field for me. I guess I got locked into thinking it was always going to one way or the other
I just know everyone is going to be focusing attention on the quarterstaff thingy in Doug's hands, so let me be among the first to say... Its a very cool idea
Finally I'd like to ask.. didja have to leave us with that cliffhanger at the end? :S_______________________________
We're definitely playing this game wrong. I thought Vampire was supposed to be a game of personal horror, not about ninja magic-carpet airstrikes at night.
- A friend after playing a session of Dark Ages Vampire.
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away. THERE IS ONLY WAR!
-Same friend.
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Take Your Candle, Go Light Your World.

*Some spoiler spacing*
Its nice to see Megumi's celestial situation resolved, though I think I half expected it. As nice as the idea of her gaining soldier powers was, halfway reading that section of the chapter, I suddenly didn't think it would have fit so to speak.
Doug's job was nicely worked in, I didn't quite expect him to find a job at all this story arc given the amount of time left till the bike is restored.
The resolution of Paradox's bookends though was totally out of the left field for me. I guess I got locked into thinking it was always going to one way or the other

I just know everyone is going to be focusing attention on the quarterstaff thingy in Doug's hands, so let me be among the first to say... Its a very cool idea

Finally I'd like to ask.. didja have to leave us with that cliffhanger at the end? :S_______________________________
We're definitely playing this game wrong. I thought Vampire was supposed to be a game of personal horror, not about ninja magic-carpet airstrikes at night.
- A friend after playing a session of Dark Ages Vampire.
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away. THERE IS ONLY WAR!
-Same friend.
_________________________________
Take Your Candle, Go Light Your World.