Well, it's after midnight...

[Norgarth]

Murmur's thread starter post about Keiichi reminded me about this.

This chapter was an example of some things that are, frankly, a bit skewed about this step. You have two view point characters who are able to indulge in
cultural in-jokes and are quite similar, in that they are sarky warriors. They are of course very different (I won't get into how they are different),
but there's just enough superficial similarities to them that having the 'let's have a misunderstanding and fight then team up afterwards',
as well as their atagonism throughout this walk is a bit . . . what's anime trope call it? Writer on Board.

Considering they are basicly both Author Avatars, I don't think that really applies.

Further, and I've mentioned this before, having these two strong characters in the forefront has really pushed aside Keiichi, the star of OMG, to the far
background.

Here's a mistake on Murmur's part, Keiichi may be the star of OMG, but he's not the star of OMB. Chris is. And Doug is obviously the Star of DW,
so having the story focus on the two of them is pretty much natural.

(Bringing up Megumi, she never seemed to have any of the mental/existential problems attributed to her, but then that's the source material. Still,
where's her cheery, cheeky optimism?)

Well, in story it's only been what, a couple of days since she found out that her brother's been dating a goddess, and thatMraller, the
demoness that has been tormenting her in her 'dreams' is real and actually did do all those things to her. She has a right to be pissed off at Mraller
and she hasn't had time to work through her feeling.
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