Looking back to the post that lead to this thread, it appears that Glazius Falconar is viewing this as entirely a DW fic and forgetting that it's a
crossover with OMB (not just standard OMG).
His problem with the confession scene for example is that from the viewpoint of a pure DW story, it's not neccesary to go into that sorta detail. But the
point he's missing is that this scene is more for Chris' character development than Doug's.
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"I've always wanted to be somebody, but I should have been more specific." - George Carlin
crossover with OMB (not just standard OMG).
His problem with the confession scene for example is that from the viewpoint of a pure DW story, it's not neccesary to go into that sorta detail. But the
point he's missing is that this scene is more for Chris' character development than Doug's.
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"I've always wanted to be somebody, but I should have been more specific." - George Carlin