You ever read Trinity by Random 1377?
He is considered the "Lemon Lord" of EVA fics, and he wrote it in response to a request for a threesome lemon.
Surprisingly, it scans fairly well, although he has stated that a proper version of it would require a few hundred pages of character development to make it truly IC...
''We don't just borrow words; on occasion, English has pursued other languages down alleyways to beat
them unconscious and rifle their pockets for new vocabulary.''
-- James Nicoll
He is considered the "Lemon Lord" of EVA fics, and he wrote it in response to a request for a threesome lemon.
Surprisingly, it scans fairly well, although he has stated that a proper version of it would require a few hundred pages of character development to make it truly IC...
''We don't just borrow words; on occasion, English has pursued other languages down alleyways to beat
them unconscious and rifle their pockets for new vocabulary.''
-- James Nicoll