Quote:Not bad. You've got the disdain for lesser minds down, but a true megalomaniacal rant has to end in all caps as you shout your evil plans to anyone willing to listen. It also helps to have the lackey echoing your sentiments with a nice, weasely "Yes, Master." every now and then, but that's not strictly necessary. I give it an 8.5 for expression, and a 7 for technical.
Little do the fools realize that this is only stage one! Now that they're hooked, we shall invent plausible but continuous reasons why the story hasn't been posted yet until such time that they are little more than our mindless slaves! Then: To Montreal! MWAHAHAHAHA!
Ebony the Black Dragon
Senior Editor, Living Room Games
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(Occasionally known as the Evil and Insidious Dr. E)
Ebony the Black Dragon
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"Good night, and may the Good Lord take a Viking to you."