Well, it's certainly ambitious. And the writing style is clean and the personality of the narrator comes through. In order to fully assess the writing, I have to know just how large a piece this is. For a short story, the prologue section is about right. For a longer piece, it needs more expansion.
at any rate, it's interesting how this nanotech AI system immediately started going the accelarando route.
However, once again I'd posit that the first time AI and handwavium came together was when the singularity hit. ('course, i'd also argue that we are living in the singularity right now). Not sure if the earth becoming nanotech cloud is exactly sympatico with the Rules. As in, in the Rules Section.
But you are Commissar, Comrade.
-murmur
at any rate, it's interesting how this nanotech AI system immediately started going the accelarando route.
However, once again I'd posit that the first time AI and handwavium came together was when the singularity hit. ('course, i'd also argue that we are living in the singularity right now). Not sure if the earth becoming nanotech cloud is exactly sympatico with the Rules. As in, in the Rules Section.
But you are Commissar, Comrade.
-murmur