flying ambulance, cool. That's definetly going to come in handy, at some point.
Off top-of-head, the speed is an issue. V can do 1.2 sustained, and she's a purpose-built speed/stealth boat. The 'actual emergency' quirk tickles me greatly, though.
I'm implied to thumbs-up the ship descriptor, but I'm interested in hearing other viewpoints on it.
Regarding your intro story, where'd the rest of it go?
It's a good start - let's see more. There's always room for ER work, especially if you've got both Reavers and Fen in the same ambulance. "Sally, could you come back here, please, Mr. Reaver is trying to devein my leg with his teeth, and it's starting to work"
I'd also like to see a more detailled writeup, perhaps some off-time character development. What do your folks do for recreation when they're not driving the Mercy?
ObGrammarBitching: sit back should be sat back, I do believe.
Again, more more more! Given community-at-large acceptance of a zoomy ambulance, I'm pleased.
One of the things that helped inspire me was detailling the 'waved tech my characters use in their day-to-day. I haven't published all of it, but I've got notes on the whole process. Really helps put meat on the bones of my description.Wire Geek - Burning the weak and trampling the dead since 1979Wire Geek - Burning the weak and trampling the dead since 1979
Off top-of-head, the speed is an issue. V can do 1.2 sustained, and she's a purpose-built speed/stealth boat. The 'actual emergency' quirk tickles me greatly, though.
I'm implied to thumbs-up the ship descriptor, but I'm interested in hearing other viewpoints on it.
Regarding your intro story, where'd the rest of it go?
It's a good start - let's see more. There's always room for ER work, especially if you've got both Reavers and Fen in the same ambulance. "Sally, could you come back here, please, Mr. Reaver is trying to devein my leg with his teeth, and it's starting to work"
I'd also like to see a more detailled writeup, perhaps some off-time character development. What do your folks do for recreation when they're not driving the Mercy?
ObGrammarBitching: sit back should be sat back, I do believe.
Again, more more more! Given community-at-large acceptance of a zoomy ambulance, I'm pleased.
One of the things that helped inspire me was detailling the 'waved tech my characters use in their day-to-day. I haven't published all of it, but I've got notes on the whole process. Really helps put meat on the bones of my description.Wire Geek - Burning the weak and trampling the dead since 1979Wire Geek - Burning the weak and trampling the dead since 1979