Bob Schroeck Wrote:Very nice. A couple grammar/word choice glitches that could be fixed, but over all, well done.Thank you...
yes, grammar is a problem for me...
Star Ranger4 Wrote:I especially liked those Fen getting their camera zorched for not realizing "hey, maybe theres a REASON you were told not to stick it there". That and the press conference, with all the reporters who didnt 'get it'*grin*
Hardtech spacecrafts that can fly to Mars are an Out-of-Context problem for most people in Fenspace and on Earth.