Proginoskes Wrote:I am greatly amused by your bits, Rob: Natsuko seems to be the only person in the simulation not included in the hyperinflation of power levels (or rather included to a much lesser extent: I doubt she started with claymore mines, but even the rest of the OpFor is getting power armor and magical toys, and Natsuko is making do with totally mundane military technology). This makes her very easy to sympathise with for those on the outside, and she's turning into a sort of Wile E. Coyote/Straight Woman figure in my head.Considering that was half of Natsuko's role in Re: Cutie Honey, it's good to know I'm writing her in character...
Not that I'm not appreciating your writing, Cobalt. AC is starting to creep into "Boring Invincible Hero" territory, but it's still entertaining. And even if I became largely disenchanted with your parts, I'd still read them because they're what make "Natsuko Coyote" work.
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Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of
the same sovereign, servants of the same law."
- Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012