Bob Schroeck Wrote:Um, Rajvik, not to harsh your creative spirit, but between the minimal paragraphing at the start and the tiny font, that's got a very bad case of Wall-of-Text going on. It is very literally difficult for me to read -- as in, my eyes ache after a few sentences. What I can see looks promising, but I'd rather read it as a single piece rather than as bits between bouts of eye pain.In Firefox or SeaMonkey, Ctrl+ makes the text larger, and Ctrl- makes it smaller. Ctrl0 brings it back to default. That said, I had to type Ctrl+ twice to make the text readable... I guess we're getting old.
I so want to get my characters in on the action, but by this point Noah's not a troubleshooter any more. The only contribution I can see to make would be to have Takami and Prim send James a data-dump if some background on Dr. Grey is needed - it would be a few years out of date, but it would mention http://www.fenspace.net/index.php5?title=EMPath]EMPath and http://www.fenspace.net/index.php5?title=Profeta]Profeta.
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Rob Kelk
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