Yeah, makes sense... but Rikti don't show up till 30 iirc... so up to 25 should be safe.
Fox's story "A Fox in the Henhouse" was fun. You can tell that there was a lot more put into making the custom characters and less into filling out the storybits. But that's okay, that's what test is for.
The gals that were mind control/martial arts with flight were AWESOME. Didn't realize they had MA until I got close in, then the roundhoused me and I was just sitting there staring for a moment dumbfounded. That was cool.
Also enjoyed the Archery/Nin characters too.
Having all your minions be */nin is sneeaky, but fun. Luckily my willpower scrapper has heightened senses, so she could see them fine, but they were neat.
One thing I would suggest is fleshing out the small details. Such as instead of the goal saying "4 locate intellegence reports" being "4 intellegence reports to locate". Other than that, it was really fun and the unique enemies in there were really neat. Good job!
Making Lady Nogi the contact is a neat trick, here's a screenie I took: http://i187.photobucket.com/albums/x7/U ... dyNogi.jpg
Fox's story "A Fox in the Henhouse" was fun. You can tell that there was a lot more put into making the custom characters and less into filling out the storybits. But that's okay, that's what test is for.
The gals that were mind control/martial arts with flight were AWESOME. Didn't realize they had MA until I got close in, then the roundhoused me and I was just sitting there staring for a moment dumbfounded. That was cool.
Also enjoyed the Archery/Nin characters too.Having all your minions be */nin is sneeaky, but fun. Luckily my willpower scrapper has heightened senses, so she could see them fine, but they were neat.
One thing I would suggest is fleshing out the small details. Such as instead of the goal saying "4 locate intellegence reports" being "4 intellegence reports to locate". Other than that, it was really fun and the unique enemies in there were really neat. Good job!
Making Lady Nogi the contact is a neat trick, here's a screenie I took: http://i187.photobucket.com/albums/x7/U ... dyNogi.jpg