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Arc 5361: Striking Midnight
 
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This Arc felt like it was part of the original story to me. I like the use of the Unknown Assailant Group/Forsaken, I think they worked VERY well. The dialogue
didn't feel as smooth as some of your other writing, but like you said, Serious stuff is not your forte. It was still a great story, well written. Precis
(db scrapper) and Min took this one on, and having the "pets" was fun/helpful. I gave it 4 stars.
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Arc 5361: Striking Midnight - by Acyl - 04-09-2009, 06:05 AM
[No subject] - by Matrix Dragon - 04-09-2009, 05:31 PM
[No subject] - by His Lovely Wife - 04-10-2009, 01:19 PM
[No subject] - by Acyl - 04-10-2009, 08:51 PM
[No subject] - by OpMegs - 04-12-2009, 03:08 AM
[No subject] - by His Lovely Wife - 04-12-2009, 10:19 AM
[No subject] - by Acyl - 04-13-2009, 03:09 AM
[No subject] - by OpMegs - 04-23-2009, 03:33 PM
[No subject] - by Acyl - 04-23-2009, 06:23 PM
[No subject] - by Ankhani - 04-23-2009, 11:39 PM
[No subject] - by Acyl - 04-23-2009, 11:58 PM

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