First, thanks for the review, and for reminding me why I need to proof everything I write.
I've added a battle between the cult and Tsoo in the first mission, hopefully that will tie things in more, and I've added a few references to
Cly's summoning in the third mission so it shouldn't be a surprise. I've also modified Naoko and Hiroshi's dialog in the 4th mission, to give
some idea of what's happening, hopefully that will help, as I'm at 100% size.
Both you and Rev have mentioned that 3rd ran in his fight, but I can't figure out why that's happening. He's not set to run away at all. Of
course it might be the flying. I'm not certain how to handle that, his PC version is an Axe/Shield Brute and changing his sets kind of ruins that. Maybe
I should give him a flight power, hmmm.
Anyway updated arc ID is 50206
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"I also need a longer attention sp- Ooh! Feet!" -- Loz Pycock
I've added a battle between the cult and Tsoo in the first mission, hopefully that will tie things in more, and I've added a few references to
Cly's summoning in the third mission so it shouldn't be a surprise. I've also modified Naoko and Hiroshi's dialog in the 4th mission, to give
some idea of what's happening, hopefully that will help, as I'm at 100% size.
Both you and Rev have mentioned that 3rd ran in his fight, but I can't figure out why that's happening. He's not set to run away at all. Of
course it might be the flying. I'm not certain how to handle that, his PC version is an Axe/Shield Brute and changing his sets kind of ruins that. Maybe
I should give him a flight power, hmmm.
Anyway updated arc ID is 50206
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"I also need a longer attention sp- Ooh! Feet!" -- Loz Pycock