Mmm... I have a question though, should my Alt's name just be her full name? Or should I tack on a rank first? And if I should put in a rank, what would the lowest police rank to be allowed on the streets be?
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Well, here's my first draft, because I'm not sure if the Bio is actually clear.
-Name: Cadet Cates
-Battle cry: *squeaky stutter* You are under arrest!
Although the PPD has the equipment and manpower to deal with most super powered threats, the other police departments still have severe trouble keeping up with Villain.
Several attempts at augmenting police forces have been made, and the latest is the Heavy Urban Peacekeeping Exo-Skeleton. (HUPEX, referred to as HUPEXes when plural.)
Several prototypes have been built and, to demonstrate the ease of use, have been issued to policemen at all levels and departments, from Commissioner Morgan to Cadet Cates.
They were then sent to various large cities with large Villain problems and, although it was impossible to skip Paragon City due to its very public super powered crimes problem, it was felt that with the PPD and significant heroic presence, it was not really needed.
And so, Cadet Jennifer J. Cates was sent to Paragon City and ordered to demonstrate the projects efficiency. Being very inexperienced, Jennifer is far from comfortable with the amount of scrutiny she is under and her nervousness is the reason why the suits no longer have voice modification equipment. (Everyone was quite embarrassed the first time they heard her stuttered and squeaky You are under arrest. spoken with a deep Robocop-ish voice.)
(RP Notes: Whenever she is not alone, Jennifer is prone to fidgeting, checking that her suit is on right and several other signs of nervousness. The only reason she hasnt been bumped out of the project yet is that, when not in public, she actually does a pretty good job, just dont point a camera at her.)
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I don't know why, but I keep getting the feeling that the costume is a bit too Clich but, at the same time, that would be par for the course, it's a new and public project eagerly looking for approval. So I now put it on public display so that everyone else can tell me, am I right or wrong, and what are your recommendations?
-Edit-
Well, here's my first draft, because I'm not sure if the Bio is actually clear.
-Name: Cadet Cates
-Battle cry: *squeaky stutter* You are under arrest!
Although the PPD has the equipment and manpower to deal with most super powered threats, the other police departments still have severe trouble keeping up with Villain.
Several attempts at augmenting police forces have been made, and the latest is the Heavy Urban Peacekeeping Exo-Skeleton. (HUPEX, referred to as HUPEXes when plural.)
Several prototypes have been built and, to demonstrate the ease of use, have been issued to policemen at all levels and departments, from Commissioner Morgan to Cadet Cates.
They were then sent to various large cities with large Villain problems and, although it was impossible to skip Paragon City due to its very public super powered crimes problem, it was felt that with the PPD and significant heroic presence, it was not really needed.
And so, Cadet Jennifer J. Cates was sent to Paragon City and ordered to demonstrate the projects efficiency. Being very inexperienced, Jennifer is far from comfortable with the amount of scrutiny she is under and her nervousness is the reason why the suits no longer have voice modification equipment. (Everyone was quite embarrassed the first time they heard her stuttered and squeaky You are under arrest. spoken with a deep Robocop-ish voice.)
(RP Notes: Whenever she is not alone, Jennifer is prone to fidgeting, checking that her suit is on right and several other signs of nervousness. The only reason she hasnt been bumped out of the project yet is that, when not in public, she actually does a pretty good job, just dont point a camera at her.)
-Another Edit-
img.photobucket.com/album...tCates.jpg
I don't know why, but I keep getting the feeling that the costume is a bit too Clich but, at the same time, that would be par for the course, it's a new and public project eagerly looking for approval. So I now put it on public display so that everyone else can tell me, am I right or wrong, and what are your recommendations?