New update, as promised. As always, it's been amended to the first post.
A bit rough. I probably need to edit it a bit further. Some of the lines prolly need to be fleshed out more; this is more or less direct from my draft. I'm posting 'cause I need to get off my ass and kick myself into finishing this. =)
(and damnit, I just realised there's an additional paragraph or two of descriptive material that should go in this section, but I forgot to include. Eh. I'll dragoon that in next update.)
A note - this story takes place earlier in his career; Superball's certainly high enough to set foot in the hazard zone referenced in this section now, he wasn't then. This should be evident, but...
-- Acyl
A bit rough. I probably need to edit it a bit further. Some of the lines prolly need to be fleshed out more; this is more or less direct from my draft. I'm posting 'cause I need to get off my ass and kick myself into finishing this. =)
(and damnit, I just realised there's an additional paragraph or two of descriptive material that should go in this section, but I forgot to include. Eh. I'll dragoon that in next update.)
A note - this story takes place earlier in his career; Superball's certainly high enough to set foot in the hazard zone referenced in this section now, he wasn't then. This should be evident, but...
-- Acyl