Agreed, very well done.
One characterization quibble... Evangelia has never called Space Mage "Spacey". In fact, when not calling her by full code name, Eva usually uses her
real first name, Adrianne, or (rarely) some diminutive of it.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
One characterization quibble... Evangelia has never called Space Mage "Spacey". In fact, when not calling her by full code name, Eva usually uses her
real first name, Adrianne, or (rarely) some diminutive of it.
-- Bob
---------
Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.