First, the story. Very nift, I really like the style, and Sell-Sword for whatever reason is fast becoming one of my favorite heroes. Villains. Whatever.
One eensy-teensy minor nitpick:
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only mention it because it completely threw me when I first read it -- "an incarnation? of what? Apollo the sun god?". Very minor, like I said,
but yeah.
Now, for the new character: ok, so, I've seen a lot of tribute/homage costumes and characters in the relatively short time I've been playing. But.
This is full of COOL.
Curse you, Riot Force 6.1! *shakes fist* I have enough alts as it is! No fair making me want to create more!
--sofaspud
--"Listening to your kid is the audio equivalent of a Salvador Dali painting, Spud." --OpMegs
One eensy-teensy minor nitpick:
Quote: "Worse then Nazis?" Lady wondered as she followed him in. Flames flickered around her hands as she whispered an incarnation. A moment later, flames formed just below the rooftop and dropped on the Nazis running towards them. As they tried toI think the word you are looking for is incantation. An incarnation would be... something else.
find cover or just charge through, Horizon picked up the door again and threw it at them.
Ionly mention it because it completely threw me when I first read it -- "an incarnation? of what? Apollo the sun god?". Very minor, like I said,
but yeah.
Now, for the new character: ok, so, I've seen a lot of tribute/homage costumes and characters in the relatively short time I've been playing. But.
This is full of COOL.
Curse you, Riot Force 6.1! *shakes fist* I have enough alts as it is! No fair making me want to create more!
--sofaspud
--"Listening to your kid is the audio equivalent of a Salvador Dali painting, Spud." --OpMegs