Nice story there. Very interesting way of narrating. One minor detail I might point out, Emet is essentially an 'it' with only Amber, who is animating
it, a 'she'. Pronouns can get confused, so it is quite fine the way you have done it, but with the way you are referring you could use 'it' in
those cases (Since you are referring to the golem solely). Regardless, it is quite well written.
---
The Master said: "It is all in vain! I have never yet seen a man who can perceive his own faults and bring the charge home against himself."
>Analects: Book V, Chaper XXVI
it, a 'she'. Pronouns can get confused, so it is quite fine the way you have done it, but with the way you are referring you could use 'it' in
those cases (Since you are referring to the golem solely). Regardless, it is quite well written.
---
The Master said: "It is all in vain! I have never yet seen a man who can perceive his own faults and bring the charge home against himself."
>Analects: Book V, Chaper XXVI