Duly noted - fortunately all dialog (save for Bang-pow effects) can be edited right up to the point I export and do the final post work.
Right now I am trying to decide whether or not to include Gil's back history in this comic (it has been covered in one of the stories) or just run to the
end. I will see where the writing takes me.
(I was going to end the issue with a Talos Beach pin-up with Beach Baby and Jackie; but I really should avoid any gratuitious boobage, if only to see Wiregeek
go 'Splodie.)
Shayne
(Or a Fight Crime Naked! pin up featuring Jackie and Argurous Astraph with carefully placed props in the best British Comedy Tradition - but I will have to get
you and Peggy to vet the model first.)
Right now I am trying to decide whether or not to include Gil's back history in this comic (it has been covered in one of the stories) or just run to the
end. I will see where the writing takes me.
(I was going to end the issue with a Talos Beach pin-up with Beach Baby and Jackie; but I really should avoid any gratuitious boobage, if only to see Wiregeek
go 'Splodie.)
Shayne
(Or a Fight Crime Naked! pin up featuring Jackie and Argurous Astraph with carefully placed props in the best British Comedy Tradition - but I will have to get
you and Peggy to vet the model first.)