DRAG0NFLIGHT Wrote:I like the idea of the BGC characters finding Paragon Earth and Largo switching focus to try and exploit a world of metas, super-robots, and random assorted gods. I don't understand enough of the backstory though to comment on Utena and how the BGC characters wind up on secrets-name basis with Rhea and Terrence's band of girlfriends.As Spud noted, a lot of this has been written up elsewhere. I recommend glancing at the "Fic" tag, which I basically added to all my stories so that *I* could easily find them back when the search function was broke on Yuku.But it looks promising, with a suitably epic level of challenge with the introduction of the USSD particle beam sats.
A breakdown of the timeline thus far, though, goes as follows:
- Largo develops custom 33-X model buma to impersonate the Knight Sabers before Red Eyes
- Crey, using access to Portal Corp, enters the BGC reality and steals the prototypes, as well as significant data storage that includes schematics for the suits, looking for a super-powered replacement for the Protectors given the Revenant Hero Project's recent public outing.
- Crey returns to the BGCverse post-Red Eyes to scavenge more tech, getting a few data storage banks that include Largo's personal backup, as well as that of Madigan (who was transferred after Red Eyes to save her from her injuries of basically being *at* ground zero when a particle beam strike hit GENOM tower.) The former soon overrides the equipment attached to his mainframe and builds a new body, escaping into the Rogue Isles. The latter is rebuilt in another Crey "Scimitar" body and put in charge of Crey's anti-Sabre operations.
- Crey continues, in classic evil corporation style, to attempt to produce more Scimitars with the creative spark that makes them more useful than robots, but without the free will and morality that makes a lot of them go rogue, taking their advanced hardsuits with them when they escape.
- Sylia co-founds Riot Force with Ifrit, mostly as a blanket cover to search for the other three of her group, but eventually to begin taking in the new generation of Sabres that are resulting from Crey's methods. Riot Force eventually coalitions with the Legendary, operating with them on a regular basis.
- Shortly after the Praetorian War begins, Madigan and her Scimitar team fake their deaths in a War Walker attack in order to cut ties with Crey, as Madigan believes the organization is going to get them killed in its desparate attempts to stop the rogue Sabres. She takes an offer of detente from Sylia to essentially a ceasefire between their groups, rather than risk hanging separately with the Praetorians breathing down everyone's neck.
- Largo, meanwhile, continues rising up the ranks of Crey under the pseudonym (and different face) of "Brian J. Mason", leading to the events that open the story.
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waste."