Bob Schroeck Wrote:I'm kind of ... concerned about the low level of response to the chapter. Should I be worrying?
Give it time, it's been a while . Still getting a more response that i'd normally see.
I'm trying to gather my thoughts together. I've read it twice and the one thing that does seem to strike me is that there's quite a bit of telling going on - a lot of information is just sort of plated up and given Especially when we first get introduced to Queen Beryl. It's not quite at Weber level -being still relevant to the plot - but it's gotten noticeable. We go from a description of the room, to a brief history of the downfall of the Crystal Millenium
It is appreciated for those who might not be up on Sailor Moon to accelerate them, but at the same time, it's something that did stand out. Maybe because I was already having a hard time focusing on anything anyway.
We meet the journalist in a similar way, gaining some background but we're just fed it rather than being led to it. Maybe I'm missing the undercurrent of something. Anyway, enough hypocrasy from me....
Usagi is fun. Especially some of her dialogue, which is amusing. It brought a smile to my face.
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