How did that get past me? Ah, well... (The next scene in the story is from Nadia's POV, then comes the scene where Doug and the children tell each other about their travels.)
As for abruptness, that's part of the problem with starting in the middle of a story. I'll see whether I can do something about it.
-Rob Kelk
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Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of
the same sovereign, servants of the same law."
- Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012
As for abruptness, that's part of the problem with starting in the middle of a story. I'll see whether I can do something about it.
-Rob Kelk
--
Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of
the same sovereign, servants of the same law."
- Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012