Quote:Yeesh. I'll say. I'm currently on chapter 15, and the only reason I've stayed this long is that it's an interesting take on the usual "Harry Breaks Free of Dumbledore" story, and I'm curious as to the direction it takes. But dear gods and little fishes, I'm about to strangle the author for the inline comments.
The writing isn't first rate, and dings a few of my pet peeves on the way,
-- Bob
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