*creaks joints*
Okay. I'll get back to it.
In return, though, I'm going to ask that somebody - *anybody* give me some feedback on that last block posted. Specifically, does anyone have any idea what I was doing with it? Comments on whether it was done well/poorly? Comments on whether or not it was a good idea in the first place?
It was a subtle(?), significant, and potentially risky piece of character development. To a degree it was there all along, and to a degree I've been trying to figure out how to keep from doing serious damage to one of the Cool Bits of the story in its wake.
or, to put it another way, *please*, *please* investigate this too closely.
I've got a bit more written but not yet postable. I'll see what I can do about filling it out more tonight.
Okay. I'll get back to it.
In return, though, I'm going to ask that somebody - *anybody* give me some feedback on that last block posted. Specifically, does anyone have any idea what I was doing with it? Comments on whether it was done well/poorly? Comments on whether or not it was a good idea in the first place?
It was a subtle(?), significant, and potentially risky piece of character development. To a degree it was there all along, and to a degree I've been trying to figure out how to keep from doing serious damage to one of the Cool Bits of the story in its wake.
or, to put it another way, *please*, *please* investigate this too closely.
I've got a bit more written but not yet postable. I'll see what I can do about filling it out more tonight.