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Space Fever
Space Fever
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(with apologies to John Masefield)

I must go up to the stars again, to the lonely lights in the black,
And all I ask is a tight ship and a star to steer her back;
And the rocket’s kick and the fan’s hum and the radios o'er it,
And a pale kiss on the world’s face, as dawn breaks in orbit.

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... and then inspiration ran out, but I think this much works, and even that is a little long for a media soundbite these days. I really wanted to have "airtight ship" on the second line, but it doesn't match the original meter even if I think the extra beat works better. Feel free to chip in with further adaptation if you've got something good.

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‎noli esse culus
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Space Fever - by classicdrogn - 10-13-2018, 09:31 PM
RE: Space Fever - by DHBirr - 10-14-2018, 02:49 AM

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