RE: Totw (step as yet un numbered) Sing-a-long ch 3
02-17-2020, 04:05 AM (This post was last modified: 02-17-2020, 04:24 AM by Star Ranger4.)
02-17-2020, 04:05 AM (This post was last modified: 02-17-2020, 04:24 AM by Star Ranger4.)
(last scene of this chapter... so, last chance for any feedback you might have?)
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It had taken a bit of back and forth, and more than a couple of moments of miscommunication, but eventually Muck found himself, along with Gamlin and Chiba, waiting as Michael, Milia’s bodyguard cum assistant punched in an access code to a hatch just off the central hanger of Island 7. When the hatch slid open, Michael nodded as Muck held up a warning hand while the his other waved Gamlin and Chiba inside. After the hatch hissed closed behind the trio, Muck held up a finger to his lips, clearly asking for silence as Muck walked forward and placed his hand on the large, battered vehicle in the center of the room.
“Recognize Primary user Thunders. Authorization Thunders Omega Six Six. Recognize Admin user Thunders, Override authorization Klatu Vertu Est.”
“Primary user recognized. Super User Recognized. Admin status Recognized. F R E D awaiting instructions.”
“System Status, FRED.”
“Primary personality and Cognisance processing on line. Mission Critical scanning systems on line. Severe Exterior damage present. Critical Failures present in primary motive systems. We’re not driving out of here anytime soon, Muck.”
“We’ll get you fixed up, mate. Short term, recognize two new users.”
“First new user. Please provide your palm for biometric scan, then state your name and provide a passcode.”
Muck waved Gamlin forward. Gamlin was tentative, but placed his hand on the hood near Muck’s hand and did his best to project confidence. “Gamilin Kisaki. Lieutenant Commander, UN Spacy. Passcode… Diamond lead actual.”
“Access Level?”
“Standard Secondary, upgradable if needed.”
“Access filed. Hello, Commander Gamlin. Please wait. Second new user?”
Chiba confidently stepped up and placed his hand near the other two. “Chiba Masahiro. Lieutenant, Un Spacy. Medical Corps, Unique Energy Specialist. Passcode… Lynn Minmei Lives.”
“Pass code accepted. Admin. User access?”
“Special access granted. Everything related to ‘sideways voyager’ sensors and portals. Authorization Thunder ninety nine. As far as where we’ve been and what we’ve done? Sorry Doc, but I’m going to authorize that on a case by case basis.”
“Access level defined. Passcode accepted. Welcome, Doctor Chiba. What next, Muck?”
“Doc Chiba here is the one you need to convince if I’m going to spring you and get you fixed up FRED. Data Point: we seem to be downstream of our time aboard the SDF-1, and at least one fica to the side. Jenius, instead of Sterling.”
“Acknowledged. Is there anything else?”
“Yes. Unlock rear cargo door. Unlatch remote access unit. Unlatch containers Papa Echo 1 through 4”
In response to this both the hatch at the rear of the vehicle opened as well as the passenger side door.
“Rear door open. Requested cargo units unlatched. Doctor Chiba. It sounds like we will be having an extended discussion. I invite you to sit and be comfortable?”
(edit to add the proposed final docx to this here)
totw.xx.04.05.docx (Size: 38.09 KB / Downloads: 0)
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It had taken a bit of back and forth, and more than a couple of moments of miscommunication, but eventually Muck found himself, along with Gamlin and Chiba, waiting as Michael, Milia’s bodyguard cum assistant punched in an access code to a hatch just off the central hanger of Island 7. When the hatch slid open, Michael nodded as Muck held up a warning hand while the his other waved Gamlin and Chiba inside. After the hatch hissed closed behind the trio, Muck held up a finger to his lips, clearly asking for silence as Muck walked forward and placed his hand on the large, battered vehicle in the center of the room.
“Recognize Primary user Thunders. Authorization Thunders Omega Six Six. Recognize Admin user Thunders, Override authorization Klatu Vertu Est.”
“Primary user recognized. Super User Recognized. Admin status Recognized. F R E D awaiting instructions.”
“System Status, FRED.”
“Primary personality and Cognisance processing on line. Mission Critical scanning systems on line. Severe Exterior damage present. Critical Failures present in primary motive systems. We’re not driving out of here anytime soon, Muck.”
“We’ll get you fixed up, mate. Short term, recognize two new users.”
“First new user. Please provide your palm for biometric scan, then state your name and provide a passcode.”
Muck waved Gamlin forward. Gamlin was tentative, but placed his hand on the hood near Muck’s hand and did his best to project confidence. “Gamilin Kisaki. Lieutenant Commander, UN Spacy. Passcode… Diamond lead actual.”
“Access Level?”
“Standard Secondary, upgradable if needed.”
“Access filed. Hello, Commander Gamlin. Please wait. Second new user?”
Chiba confidently stepped up and placed his hand near the other two. “Chiba Masahiro. Lieutenant, Un Spacy. Medical Corps, Unique Energy Specialist. Passcode… Lynn Minmei Lives.”
“Pass code accepted. Admin. User access?”
“Special access granted. Everything related to ‘sideways voyager’ sensors and portals. Authorization Thunder ninety nine. As far as where we’ve been and what we’ve done? Sorry Doc, but I’m going to authorize that on a case by case basis.”
“Access level defined. Passcode accepted. Welcome, Doctor Chiba. What next, Muck?”
“Doc Chiba here is the one you need to convince if I’m going to spring you and get you fixed up FRED. Data Point: we seem to be downstream of our time aboard the SDF-1, and at least one fica to the side. Jenius, instead of Sterling.”
“Acknowledged. Is there anything else?”
“Yes. Unlock rear cargo door. Unlatch remote access unit. Unlatch containers Papa Echo 1 through 4”
In response to this both the hatch at the rear of the vehicle opened as well as the passenger side door.
“Rear door open. Requested cargo units unlatched. Doctor Chiba. It sounds like we will be having an extended discussion. I invite you to sit and be comfortable?”
(edit to add the proposed final docx to this here)
totw.xx.04.05.docx (Size: 38.09 KB / Downloads: 0)
Hear that thunder rolling till it seems to rock the sky?
Thats' every ship in Grayson's Navy taking up the cry!
NO QUARTER!
No Quarter by Echo's Children
Thats' every ship in Grayson's Navy taking up the cry!
NO QUARTER!
No Quarter by Echo's Children