(08-12-2021, 07:01 AM)robkelk Wrote: I've had the advantage of pre-reading this part, so I'll confine myself to a couple of errors - one mine, one BA's. Starting with mine:
Quote:Mikoto could only barely grasp the concept. She had rarely ever felt true hunger, and the times she did was when she missed a meal because of circumstances beyond her control coming to play.
My error because I didn't catch it in prereading. Mikoto did willingly go without food by choice while she was destroying cloning labs during Railgun S - which was the only reason she didn't throw up the first time she fought ITEM.
Okey dokey. I'll rework that later before we post this to the Wiki.
(08-12-2021, 07:01 AM)robkelk Wrote:Quote:fowl remarks"Remarkable bird, the Norwegian Blue, idn'it, ay? Beautiful plumage! "
fowl/foul
(08-12-2021, 09:10 AM)Bob Schroeck Wrote: Wow.
That's all I can say, other than to note:
Quote:Ryouko is my sparing partner these days.Unless she routinely goes easy on him, that should be "sparring". <grin>
Urgh. And the really messed up part is that not even the Grammar Checker in MS Word would be likely to catch these goofs. Thanks for spotting those.