Mm. Minor typo:
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
Quote:Once the Fen have metered out their punishmentI think you mean "meted" here. And wasn't it "Kempei Tai", not "Kempai Tai"?
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.