Proving that this one isn't dead yet. This one is actually a rewrite of the last teaser snippet, but I think this one flows much better as a whole. --Mal
Down in the wardroom, the four members of the SOS-dan's “inner circle” sat strapped into their lounge chairs and wondered what the hell was going on.
“It's pretty quiet up there,” Kyon noted. “You think maybe he killed her?”
“Doubtful,” Yuki Nagato said absently, staring out the holographic viewscreen that served as the wardroom's front window. “Killing Haruhi would make more noise. Something else is going on.”
“-Flight deck to wardroom,-” Major Oorebeek's crackled through the ship's intercom. “-What's your status?-”
The four exchanged puzzled looks. “Uh, we're still here Major,” Kyon replied. “Where's Haruhi?”
“-The Supreme Commander,-” Oorebeek said with distinct relish, “-is obeying orders for once.-”
“(That does *not* sound good at all,)” Itsuki Koizumi muttered.
“-Anyway, things are getting heavy right now, so stay strapped in until we give the okay. Oh, and you might not want to look out the window for the next couple of minutes. Flight deck out.-”
“What did she mean about not looking out the window?” Kyon asked, puzzled. Itsuki shrugged and Yuki looked blank (as usual).
The fourth member of the bad, Mikuru Asahina, started to say something, but cut off the first syllable with a startled squeak. Eyes wide, she pointed a shaking arm towards the window.
Outside, Ptichka was surrounded by a corona of fire.
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Down in the wardroom, the four members of the SOS-dan's “inner circle” sat strapped into their lounge chairs and wondered what the hell was going on.
“It's pretty quiet up there,” Kyon noted. “You think maybe he killed her?”
“Doubtful,” Yuki Nagato said absently, staring out the holographic viewscreen that served as the wardroom's front window. “Killing Haruhi would make more noise. Something else is going on.”
“-Flight deck to wardroom,-” Major Oorebeek's crackled through the ship's intercom. “-What's your status?-”
The four exchanged puzzled looks. “Uh, we're still here Major,” Kyon replied. “Where's Haruhi?”
“-The Supreme Commander,-” Oorebeek said with distinct relish, “-is obeying orders for once.-”
“(That does *not* sound good at all,)” Itsuki Koizumi muttered.
“-Anyway, things are getting heavy right now, so stay strapped in until we give the okay. Oh, and you might not want to look out the window for the next couple of minutes. Flight deck out.-”
“What did she mean about not looking out the window?” Kyon asked, puzzled. Itsuki shrugged and Yuki looked blank (as usual).
The fourth member of the bad, Mikuru Asahina, started to say something, but cut off the first syllable with a startled squeak. Eyes wide, she pointed a shaking arm towards the window.
Outside, Ptichka was surrounded by a corona of fire.
Mr. Fnord interdimensional man of mystery
FenWiki - Your One-Stop Shop for Fenspace Information
"I. Drink. Your. NERDRAGE!"