First glance stuff:
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Fans of Issac Asimov, watching the arguments between the [[Browncoats] and [[Heinleinians] over "ownership" of [[Ganymede], acted quickly to establish a claim on Vesta. They built the first post-secondary educational institutions in space, the '''Vesta Institute of Biochemistry''' and the '''Vesta Institute of Robotics''', the two fields of study most associated with Professor Asimov.
should be "led," not "lead." Also, is Novyi Petrovichi a direct reference? Seems to me if they're going Russian for the name it should be Novyi Petrograd.
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Quote:During the early days of Fen expansion into the Solar System, the [[Browncoats] and [[Heinleinians] argued over who was entitled to [[Ganymede], based on their fandoms' pre-handwave fiction. (The [[Fivers] eventually got the two groups to share.) The Asimov fen saw this, acted quickly to claim Vesta as their own, and built the first post-secondary educational institutions in space there: the '''Vesta Institute of Biochemistry''' and the '''Vesta Institute of Robotics''' teach the two scientific fields most associated with Prof. Asimov.
Rephrase:
Fans of Issac Asimov, watching the arguments between the [[Browncoats] and [[Heinleinians] over "ownership" of [[Ganymede], acted quickly to establish a claim on Vesta. They built the first post-secondary educational institutions in space, the '''Vesta Institute of Biochemistry''' and the '''Vesta Institute of Robotics''', the two fields of study most associated with Professor Asimov.
Quote:lead early Fen settlers to locate '''Novyi Petrovichi''' (Vesta's first permanent settlement) there.
should be "led," not "lead." Also, is Novyi Petrovichi a direct reference? Seems to me if they're going Russian for the name it should be Novyi Petrograd.
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