Quote:Shall we also redo the email thread? I promise that Ben will behave better.
I'm not sure what will happen with the email thread. My initial impulse is to scrap it in favor of prose while salvaging the core plot points & dialogue (see: South Is Rising round 2), but the distributed nature of the argument makes that difficult. We'll see. I'm still working on revising Mal's meeting with Mary and the opening of the committee meeting, so we can still sort things out.
Also, Ben behaving badly actually makes him a more interesting character than Squarejaw McSpacehero. Plus I have profanity-laced plans for Ben, so request denied.
(Mal: "I'm going to kill him. I swear to Almighty Zeus, I'm going to kill him! I'm going to castrate him and suffocate him on his own cock and balls!")
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