Um, Rajvik, not to harsh your creative spirit, but between the minimal paragraphing at the start and the tiny font, that's got a very bad case of Wall-of-Text going on. It is very literally difficult for me to read -- as in, my eyes ache after a few sentences. What I can see looks promising, but I'd rather read it as a single piece rather than as bits between bouts of eye pain.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.