Take the version you currently have saved to your hard drive and run it through a spell check. This will catch a LOT of your spelling errors. All sentences
need a full stop at the end and a capital letter at the front. When you use 'I', it needs to be capitalized. At no point do you mention it's a
sequel to the other Yarnball missions, which is fine, except you don't actually explain what Yarnball does, or that the Family is behind it. It has
potential, but right now it's buried in a lot of errors in the text.
need a full stop at the end and a capital letter at the front. When you use 'I', it needs to be capitalized. At no point do you mention it's a
sequel to the other Yarnball missions, which is fine, except you don't actually explain what Yarnball does, or that the Family is behind it. It has
potential, but right now it's buried in a lot of errors in the text.