Nice - only one nitpick. What's this about the Valentine's event being over when you start your story? I think according to the story, that it hadn't even begun yet. (Ckecks) Yeah, January 19 is the date we had set for this. Valentines Event hadn't even _started_ yet.
Other than that though, good job!-Logan
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"Wake up! Time for SCIENCE!"
-Adam Savage
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Other than that though, good job!-Logan
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"Wake up! Time for SCIENCE!"
-Adam Savage
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