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Always Look On The Bright Side (Short Fic)
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Good so far, I like how you stay within the mechanics of the COH world, without slaving yourself to it. Perhaps not as manic as normal, but Superball's interior dialog isn't normally as out their as his external one.
Hmmm. Unlikely angel. Space Mage?
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Feedback - by Rev Dark - 09-12-2006, 09:07 PM
Re: Feedback - by Acyl - 09-12-2006, 09:39 PM
angels - by Foxboy - 09-12-2006, 09:54 PM
Re: angels - by Acyl - 09-12-2006, 10:16 PM

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