Wow... Very VERY well done!
From my perspective, I was pleased that you did Pete/C8 so well. The speeding through the city and the punching through the war wall weren't quite what I
expected - I never envisioned him having a passenger along for that, for one thing! But that may be more a function of me never seeing ANYone in the game
carrying anyone else at all! After a while, you almost forget about stuff like that. But of course Cyberman should be able to carry someone else along with
him. It makes perfect sense. And his confrontation with Sam was everything I could've hoped for.
Overall, very powerful story. I cringed when Bill shot Nene's faceplate by accident. I was afraid for a second that it had done serious damage! And their
confrontation was as powerful as Pete and Sam's.
(Technical geekery - what exactly ARE Dark Watchers powers anyway?)
From my perspective, I was pleased that you did Pete/C8 so well. The speeding through the city and the punching through the war wall weren't quite what I
expected - I never envisioned him having a passenger along for that, for one thing! But that may be more a function of me never seeing ANYone in the game
carrying anyone else at all! After a while, you almost forget about stuff like that. But of course Cyberman should be able to carry someone else along with
him. It makes perfect sense. And his confrontation with Sam was everything I could've hoped for.
Overall, very powerful story. I cringed when Bill shot Nene's faceplate by accident. I was afraid for a second that it had done serious damage! And their
confrontation was as powerful as Pete and Sam's.
(Technical geekery - what exactly ARE Dark Watchers powers anyway?)