In case you haven't noticed the status report at the top of most forum pages, I've gone ahead and split chapter 1 into two separate chapters. After I complete a final pass on the new chapter 1, I will be sending it to preread. In the mean time, chapter 2 progresses, and I've set up the file for chapter 3.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.