Thank you for the feedback. McGonagall is probably the character I've had most difficulty writing thus far.
Michael's magical strength is pretty much average. He is not sub-par, he just isn't exceptional. It's the same as his flying ability - he can get around perfectly well, but he's unlikely to wind up on the Quidditch team. Given that he does better academically than Harry would have, this is liable to be marked down as him taking more after Lily than James.
I didn't really plan to explore what happened to Harry, but more recently I've had some ideas. At the moment, I'm considering interludes to look at that.
Some questions to consider:
1) Does Lily's blood protection apply to Michael?
2) Does the prophecy apply to Michael?
D for Drakensis
You're only young once, but immaturity is forever.
Michael's magical strength is pretty much average. He is not sub-par, he just isn't exceptional. It's the same as his flying ability - he can get around perfectly well, but he's unlikely to wind up on the Quidditch team. Given that he does better academically than Harry would have, this is liable to be marked down as him taking more after Lily than James.
I didn't really plan to explore what happened to Harry, but more recently I've had some ideas. At the moment, I'm considering interludes to look at that.
Some questions to consider:
1) Does Lily's blood protection apply to Michael?
2) Does the prophecy apply to Michael?
D for Drakensis
You're only young once, but immaturity is forever.