Quote:ooh yes...... I noticed. its frustrating. In some chapters it feels more like its a squashed version of the story, its certainly quite confusing... and I have read the full chapters before too._____________________________
There's just one small problem, as of time of writing it appears that FF.net has eaten a fair portion of paragraphs early on in all of the chapters. The flow of the story, while still good is therefore missing pieces of important information which will leave those who haven't read the full chapters confused.
Shepard Book: The special hell reserved for child molesters and people who talk in cinemas.
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Take Your Candle, Go Light Your World.