I see your thread and think, "I should read that and add a comment or two, this isn't the biggest fic writers' board," but, well, to avoid being insulting, BT takes my preferred paradigm and turns it into something painful, so only the worst sort of roflstomp crossover in the other property's favor appeals to me in BT fic, and I don't want to spoil your story or the enthusiasm for it. (See also "Wave Convoy is still useable as a bg character but is probably best left out of major sequences in CiTD.")
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"Anko, what you do in your free time is your own choice. Use it wisely. And if you do not use it wisely, make sure you thoroughly enjoy whatever unwise thing you are doing." - HymnOfRagnorok as Orochimaru at SpaceBattles
woot Med. Eng., verb, 1st & 3rd pers. prsnt. sg. know, knows
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"Anko, what you do in your free time is your own choice. Use it wisely. And if you do not use it wisely, make sure you thoroughly enjoy whatever unwise thing you are doing." - HymnOfRagnorok as Orochimaru at SpaceBattles
woot Med. Eng., verb, 1st & 3rd pers. prsnt. sg. know, knows