[RFC] Being You is Deculture

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Reading the thread again, I came across this bit, and thought of a line that might be inserted just after the sigh for Garrick, whether spoken or just as internal narration:

I looked Minmei in the eyes and finally said, “You know that I don’t ever tell you anything that I think may even be remotely wrong, right?”

“Well you’re wrong about this.”

I sighed. I wasn’t going to get any further on this matter. But just to remind her, I pulled her into a hug. She turned her face away from me, a petulant glower on her face the whole time. But even so, I left a soft kiss on her cheek and I felt her resolve falter.

“I’m going to go ahead and get something to eat, and then head on back to the barracks. Goodnight, Minmei.”

She said nothing as I closed the door.

(sigh, hug) "And one of the things I love is how ready you are to fight for what's important to you." (she turned away, but... etc.)


Also, in a later part Achika's letter calls Kaifun a cunt, but I think she may yet be overestimating his warmth and depth