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Holding One's Destiny... 'Hidden Road'?
Holding One's Destiny... 'Hidden Road'?
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Quote: Holding Destiny With Your Own Two Hands pt 6 (Naruto timetravel fic)


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3996804/6/H ... _Two_Hands

First may I say that the overall quality of the story has dramatically increased - so much so that I can barely believe it's the same one.

The idea of a wandering, neutral, gypsy caravan 'Hidden Village' that services towns and villages that don't have local ninja or are too poor to
afford the bigger Hidden village's prices is all sorts of awesome. It's perfect, I don't know why no one has ever thought of it before - 'The
Village Hidden in the Road' (Not sure how that would come out in Japanese)- a winding road or a wagon wheel as their symbol.

Never in the same place twice... Hard to find, attack or fight.

K
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#2
Wouldn't that be 'The Villlage Hidden on the Road'? 8)
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#3
Heard by travellers passing by on the main roads.

"Make way! Make way! Hidden village passing through!"
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#4
To mangle a quote from The Tick:

"We are not ninja, we are a caravan, please move along."
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#5
thats a crossover that should not be
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