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Pieces of Me (SI, Mass-X-Over, RFC, Warning: Rated Hard-R)
RE: Pieces of Me (SI, Mass-X-Over, RFC, Warning: Rated Hard-R)
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CD's got the right of it. If you suck at action, then neatly avoid it. Doing it the way he suggested keeps it from *just* being an info dump, as you're actually interacting with the Princesses, probably answering questions as they arise.

EDIT: On the same token, though, spend time writing out the action anyhow. You'll never get good at it if you don't practice.
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RE: Pieces of Me (SI, Mass-X-Over, RFC, Warning: Rated Hard-R) - by Black Aeronaut - 08-10-2018, 10:06 AM

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