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[OOC][PLOT] The Third Thread of Planning for Arc 1 - Arrivals
RE: [OOC][PLOT] The Third Thread of Planning for Arc 1 - Arrivals
I'm pulling together a string of moments but nothing seems to coherently be a story.

The girls don't idolise Meg. Meg is an equal. They don't just follow what Meg asks them because she's the leader.
Data is the perfect person to manage the house - they can't manipulate him and he won't take advantage of them.

Alita.... seemed like a cool idea. Unlike the traditional 'Princess Maker', there's no controlling her, there's just letting her find something interesting for her to GO on and pour everything into.

But I really can't get much past a few moments, much less a coherent story.

-Meg with a partner.
-Lou and Meg - why Lou trusts Meg. Why Sylvie won't
-Data refusing advances.
-Data getting a driver's license, claiming to be Polish
-Data getting RECI certified, with 'Polish' qualifications.
-Data taking on work as an electrician... Treknobabble in the modern world
-Meg's car dumps an apex seal with Data onboard
-Sylive and Meg in a scrapyard looking for parts, or for a motorcycle. Alita is found in the scrapyard.
-Sylie effectivelly calls Meg a 'House Slave' and blames her for getting them all killed. Data breaks up the resulting fight....
- the girls meet a skeevy recording producer whos office has a familiar black couch. He gets more than he bargained for.
- A bubblegum crisis -uber-fan recognises the girls from an online post.....

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The question then becomes, what the hell to do with Alita. Which becomes, what does she want to do? What's the point of her beyond having her in the story?

I love the smell of rotaries in the morning. You know one time, I got to work early, before the rush hour. I walked through the empty carpark, I didn't see one bloody Prius or Golf. And that smell, you know that gasoline smell, the whole carpark, smelled like.... ....speed.

One day they're going to ban them.


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RE: [OOC][PLOT] The Third Thread of Planning for Arc 1 - Arrivals - by Dartz - 03-03-2019, 06:41 PM

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